Crimson Song - Yuri Visual Novel

абсолютно всё время пришлось держать телефон с включённым гугл переводчиком (по фото), в некоторых местах этот же корявый перевод в своей голове преобразовывать в что-то нормальное по смыслу РАДИ того, чего не показали. ну ладно, мне всё равно понравилось

A short, but intriguing tale between a young woman on a quest and a vampire mistress that intends on stopping her for her onw desires. The writing could use a polish up, though most of the text is clear, for an English translation some minor gramatical errors. The story however was still understood enough and enjoyable. Love the artwork also.

The game is not bad but it was not really good either. i enjoyed the music and art of the game as well as the setting and idea. classic idea but you can not really go wrong with it. however.. i am not sure if this game is translated or if the original text was written in english, but there are definitely some problems with the grammar AND at some point also choice of vocabulary (who uses the phrase 'impregnated the room' when describing a scent filling the air ??). For a game this cheap i can igore it but any more would have ruined it for sure. Still, this should not happen and even free indie games are not seen with these problems. I did have an unexpected moment of laughter when diandrir (i forgot if that was how her name was spelled) just casually said her 'piss running down her clothes' lol. the mixup between common/easy language and language more approriate of the setting also added to the problem, it was hard to keep the 'vibe' if i might say so. Other than that, the story started quite interesting and ended quite boring, it was barely anything so i do not have much to talk about.